However, my hopes of redeeming myself were dashed: no one wanted to buy my book.
I have a friend one Facebook who wanted to help. Although I think my book is fine as it is, there were people who didn't. I let her look at the first three chapters and this is what I am told basically:
"You have two many point of views."
Okay so I have to stick with one for each section or chapter.
"Romance readers don't like the Ominscient point of views."
That means I can't let me readers know what certain characters are thinking or feeling at my given time.
Why do they have to be picky? By changing how the POV is written, I have actually changed the whole dynamic of my story? It is no longer how I have written it but what others want.
Currently my book is selling for 11.99 but I am thinking of setting at 13.99. Why? Because I am rewriting it to please my picky readers. That book has taken me years to perfect and yet no one is satisfied with the finished product.
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